Tuesday, January 25, 2011

A blackbird

The magician kept his crowds on
the edges of the their seats as
he collapsed the cage and the
blackbird disappeared.

Of course, another blackbird was
up his sleeve the whole
time, as the prestige meant death.
The first blackbird always died.

It really wasn’t his best
trick, but it really was his life. He was
the blackbird, and the saddest thing was
he never knew if he was in the cage or up a sleeve.   


This poem was written for an obstruction assignment after turning in my first poem, The Prestige. I had some prompts, to keep it in third person and use some enjambments. It is far form the original at first glance, but of course I think it is close, if one has at least seen the film. 

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